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Prompt: Double-Dactyl

Rocket

Off to the races, she
Filling the spaces, we
Unserendipitous
Caroming off

Parallel paradigm
Always and never, you
Here in our rocket-ship
Barreling off

©2012 yahneverknow

EDITED TO ADD:

Yet again, I seem to miss important pieces of the form. Nonsense-ified first line of first stanza —> I’ll just switch them, then.

Parallel paradigm
Always and never, you
Here in our rocket-ship
Barreling off

Off to the races, she
Filling the spaces, we
Unserendipitous
Caroming off

©2012 yahneverknow

Hmm. Might even be better this way.

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